“And lo on the eve (not evening, eve) of Mayday, the wind blew and the sky parted and a light came down from the heavens and as she looked up he showed himself to her.” Wait, that doesn’t sound right. “He revealed himself to her.” Still not right. “He exposed himself to her.” Worse! “He showed that he was there (better) and ‘here.’ So it was that in every rare moment of sanctuary on that day and many to come, she smiled.”
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